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Let's put this into practice...

Would anyone be willing to take a critical look at the fanfic that I finished last night? It was the one that sparked my "-ing" question. I've written it almost without using the "-ing" form and it's sounding strange to me. I use my fanfics as writing practices for my original works. Anything that I'm learning while writing or revising a fanfic, I will later be implemented into my original.

So if someone would be willing to look at this - it's a Final Fantasy 7 Crisis Core - Angeal x Zack - Fanfic (not safe for work, though the pr0n doesn't happen until the latter half, so it's not a PWP) - I would be very grateful.

I'm not sure whether the fandom is important, as I'm more interested in hearing whether the story flows, whether I've managed to get you involved as the reader, whether you get a feel for the characters (even if they're more or less set) and so on. Style also is important to me.

File is a WORD document and I'll send it to you, if you give me your email address.

*HUGS Flist*

^____^

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lyssyface
Jun. 2nd, 2010 05:22 pm (UTC)
Send it my way, I are beta.

lyssy.doll@hotmail.com
ravensilver
Jun. 2nd, 2010 05:24 pm (UTC)
You is beta? Yeah!

Coming your way at the speed of internet. :)
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