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Critique requested

I'm experimenting with a new series of photographs...

You can find the first one here: Office Day

Tell me what you think. Is it too much in one picture? Is it too confusing? Too small? Too cluttered? Should I use a neutral background instead?

Go ahead, give it to me! :)

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amarissia
Jan. 31st, 2011 03:09 pm (UTC)
It is a bit cluttered, but it's got lots of personality.
ravensilver
Jan. 31st, 2011 03:16 pm (UTC)
Cluttered? Hm... Maybe a neutral background instead?
amarissia
Feb. 1st, 2011 03:17 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I think a neutral background will tone it down a bit, and make it easier to focus on the rest of the picture.
jo_mako
Jan. 31st, 2011 05:42 pm (UTC)
amarissia Summed up my initial impression of it. Cluttered was the first word that came to mind. Ooo try it with it a neutral background, maybe that would be less jarring visually than the suggestion I posted in my critique.

Edited at 2011-01-31 05:43 pm (UTC)
ravensilver
Jan. 31st, 2011 07:07 pm (UTC)
I'll re-do it and try to unclutter it.

Thank you for posting a critique on it at DA! <3
jo_mako
Jan. 31st, 2011 07:15 pm (UTC)
No worries, and I'm glad you found it useful!

mirien
Jan. 31st, 2011 06:12 pm (UTC)
Tiny bit cluttered, although I rather like that. Damn, I LOVE seeing the space where other people work, makes me feel I know them a little bit better. OH AND I WANT YOUR ORANGE STAR MUG.

That um, wasn't very helpful critique-wise, was it?

Edited at 2011-01-31 06:15 pm (UTC)
ravensilver
Jan. 31st, 2011 07:05 pm (UTC)
*ggg*

Cluttered seems to be the consensus. I'll try re-arranging the pics to make them clearer...

*gg* My orange star mug? That's part of a series of mugs with different designs. ^^ I'm not sure they're available in the UK. They're produced by Cha-Cult. But I don't think that these exist anymore. Unfortunately, since some of them have lost their handles... ;__;

*gg* It was just fine. Thank you. ^^
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lil_1337
Feb. 1st, 2011 03:35 am (UTC)
It's interesting, but for me it was a bit overwhelming trying to take everything in at once.
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