November 23rd, 2007

melancholy mountains

Writing Feedback needed...

I've started an original Yaoi story, that I might want to work into our publishing program later - but only if it's good enough. I'd like to post it here in parts and ask for your feedback on it.

Don't hold back. I can take criticism, as long as it's constructive - i.e. helping me make it better. I need not so much grammar, spelling and punctuation corrected (that comes much later), but rather content feedback. Am I telling a story, or are you bored to tears...?

The theme is Medieval/Fantasy.

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